So,
this is just a short little post. I have NaNoWriMo coming up, and I
plan on diving in as I usually do. I think I've even picked out the
story I want to write. So I'm going to be posting bits and pieces of
world building and character building on the blog on Wednesdays just
to show you a small glimpse into the mind of a very weird writer.
That will take care of the rest of October. There will be something
new in November, though I'm not sure what that is right now. So, see
you on Friday for another Friday Fiction!
The adventures of a writer as she goes from ideas to published and everything in between.
A bridge over a beautiful waterfall
Nature brings magic
Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Monday, October 12, 2015
My weekend adventure with technology (aka I built a thing)
So,
on Saturday morning a calamity struck my little corner of existence:
my laptop died. I don't mean the “oh it just needs to be plugged in
longer” death. No, I mean that even though it was plugged in the
battery wouldn't hold a charge. It went from 73% to 42% to 3% in a
matter of twenty minutes. Nothing I did stopped this inexorable
decline. And since my laptop no longer runs if the battery isn't in
it (or dies), it was pretty much pointless to keep trying to make it
work. Monstrosity is five years old, so she outlived her projected
life by at least a year.
As
you can imagine, this left me feeling a little panicky. My laptop was
my life. It held all my writing, it was my only way to talk to
friends and family, and it was my main source of entertainment. I was
really stressing because, well, computers aren't cheap and I didn't
have the money to get a new one.
I
asked a few people for some help and was given $400 to get a new
computer. That didn't sound too bad to me, since I already had the
monitor, keyboard, and mouse. Keyboard and mouse were bought when the
keyboard on my laptop started failing. The monitor came with us when
we moved.
So,
my husband and two of our roommates headed into a larger town than we
live in now and went to the electronics store. It was huge. We were
there for over an hour and we still hadn't seen everything by the
time we all hurt enough that we needed to get out of there. We plan a
return trip at some point in the near future.
Leaving
our roommates to wander on their own, Himself and I wandered over to
the computer section. We were greeted by the absolute worst salesman
that I've had the displeasure of meeting. He asked us if we needed
something specific. We said we were just looking. He proceeded to
hover over us and when we did ask him a question he didn't know the
answer. So we left him there and headed elsewhere in the building.
Himself
and one of our other roommates suggested I try my hand at building a
computer. I was terrified. I mean, I know how to turn it on, turn it
off, and run various pieces of software. I never even gave a thought
to learning the hardware side of it. But we priced out the parts and
it proved that it would be within my budget to do it. So with their
help I picked out a case, a motherboard, a power source, and a CPU.
One of our roommates was upgrading his video card, so since it was
still a good one I got his used one.
So,
after we got home, the roommate upgrading his computer and I headed
out to the shop where there was more space to work. As we got
started, I realized I had no clue what to do. I managed to get the
motherboard in but that was where I stalled out. I didn't know where
to plug stuff in. So our other roommate came out to check on us. With
his help, we got my computer built. He ended up putting the CPU in
because of how fragile it is, and he got one of the little
connections I couldn't quite get set in for me too.
Once
it was done, I brought it inside and set it up on the table we're
using as a shared desk. I plugged it in and turned it on. Or at least
I tried to. It sat there, not doing anything. By that point I was
frustrated and upset that it wasn't working. Since it was late
Himself suggested I go to bed and work on it in the morning. Since it
was late I agreed with him.
This
morning it still didn't turn on so I was struggling with it. I looked
to see if anything was unplugged inside and there weren't any signs
of loose cables. So I put it back up on the desk. Himself came in and
flipped the switch in the back. When I poked the button again my
computer booted right up. I remembered hitting the switch last night,
thinking it was in the off position. I guess it was in the on
position.
Once
I got the computer up and running, I grabbed our Windows 7 disk. I
popped it in the DVD drive and…..nothing happened. It wouldn't run.
So Himself got in and pulled the hard drive out, fixed the issue with
the DVD drive and plugged the hard drive back in. Then it worked. I
got Windows 7 installed. If you've ever done a fresh install of
Windows 7 (or any of the Windows incarnations), you know how long
that process is. I got Windows loaded up.
Then
I needed to get it hooked up to the internet. Since I don't have a wi
fi card, we plugged me in hard line into the router. Behemoth, as
I've named my new toy, wasn't registering the ethernet port. So I
tried putting in the drivers using a USB stick. Behemoth didn't
register the USB ports either. The roommate who gave me his video
card came in and asked me if there was a disk with my new
motherboard. If there was, it would have everything I needed. I'd
seen the disk but hadn't thought much about it. I went out to the
area where I'd put the box I'd put all the manuals in and opened it
up. Sure enough, there was the desk.
So
that got put into the computer and lo and behold, I had a functional
computer with an internet connection. But since I wanted Windows 10,
I went ahead and upgraded to that. When that finally finished (and it
was a long wait), I had to install all of the programs that I use.
That was easier, though it was still time consuming.
Now
I have a working computer. It's an interesting situation being on a
regular desktop rather than a laptop. I've been on a laptop for the
better part of five years. But it's nice too. I got a 1 TB hard drive
this time, which means I can put a whole lot more than I already have
on there. Who knows what I'll use the space for, but I'm sure I'll
find something.
I
still need to transfer the stuff from my old hard drive to the new
one. I was loaned a little doohickey to do it with. I'm going to ask
for help with it since I have no clue what it's supposed to do. I was
upset when I thought I'd lost my work over the last few days since,
like a moron, I didn't back it up to Box or Google Drive. Then I
remembered what Himself has had me doing. I e-mail him status
reports, including copies of what I've worked on. I was able to
retrieve my most recent edits, which made me happy.
So,
I have a new toy that I can upgrade as I need and not have to buy a
complete new device unless I want to. I can just switch out parts.
That is also a relief. Computers are expensive. But that's my
adventure over the weekend. It was not something I want to repeat any
time soon, but I learned a lot about computers so it's all good.
Friday, October 9, 2015
Friday Fiction: A calm night in Lacey's bar
Lacey's is a little hole in the wall place with an eclectic history, much like its owners - a strange, non-human woman named Aya and her werewolf business partner who simply calls himself Junior. With their rather unique staff, they deal with both the human and the supernatural residents of their town. Sometimes the worlds intersect in interesting - and occasionally violent - ways, though Aya does her best to keep the violence down to a minimum.
Lacey's
was quiet, not an unusual occurrence for a Wednesday night. Aya
surveyed her kingdom with the air of a benevolent ruler, smiling at
the few regulars who hunched over drinks at the bar. There was a
faint buzz of voices in her ear piece but as there weren't many
people it was more the chatter of the collection of friends she had
working for her than anything else. She nodded to Junior, her
business partner and head bouncer. He grinned back.
Lacey's
was a little, out of the way bar that had been many things since it's
inaugural opening in 1921. A speakeasy, a dance hall, a billiards
parlor, a restaurant, and now back to its original state of a bar.
The only thing that stayed the same about the place were the stained
glass windows. Rumor had it they'd been shot out by police during the
Prohibition, but the owners just paid to get them replaced.
She
glanced over at the two pool tables she had set up in the back. The
usual crowd wasn't there yet, so they sat unused and silent. The dart
players were there, laughing at each other when they missed the
target. They weren't drunk yet so she didn't need one of her three
bouncers chase them off.
She
went back into her office and sat down behind the desk. The time
sheets were already loaded into the computer. She started converting
them from tiny bits of data into the hard copy paychecks she'd be
handing out on Thursday.
“Hey
boss, we've got two nuisances coming in,” Junior said. Though he
was the co-owner of Lacey's, he preferred to act like he was just an
employee.
“Who?”
Aya asked.
“That
reporter and a werewolf,” Junior said. “He's already pulling that
attempt at alpha male shit at me.”
“Brendon
told them to quit that,” Aya said.
“I
don't think it's one of the pack,” Junior said. “He doesn't smell
right and I don't recognize him.”
“Great,
a stray,” Aya said. She pinched the bridge of her nose. “Which
one's more important?”
“The
reporter. He's got a camera.” Junior's voice held a hint of a
growl. “He's pointing it at Randy, who conveniently had to run into
the back. Everyone else is hightailing it too. Coop, Alex, and I are
the only ones left.”
“I'm
on my way,” Aya said. She got up and walked out into the main area.
“Ms.
Winters,” the reporter said, holding his camera in one hand. He
extended the other. “I'm so glad to see you. I really think we
could do a great piece on this place, with it's history and all. If
you and your staff would stand for pictures, we'd show what a great
little family you've got here.”
Aya
snorted. Family was a good term for the ragtag bundle of misfits that
worked for her. She stared at the reporter's hand until he dropped
it. “Mr. Kelley, I've told you politely several times what my
opinion on doing a piece on Lacey's is. Let me be more blunt this
time. No, you're not going to get our pictures. No, I refuse to give
you access to our records. No, I do not want an article published
anywhere on our establishment. If you even so much as try, I'll have
a lawyer up your ass so fast you'll need an enema to get him out.”
Wednesday, October 7, 2015
A short post on autumn
October
is here. It contains so many wonderful things: Halloween. Fall
colors. Cool weather. Spiced apple cider. Pumpkin pie (and pumpkin
cheesecake.) My 13th wedding anniversary.
October
is the first full month of autumn in the year. September is still
winding down from the heat of summer. But October...October brings
with it a fuller effect of autumn. Leaves that were just barely
thinking of turning colors in September begin to change with a much
stronger force. Nights bring frost (in my neck of the woods, at
least). Days bring cool but sunny days.
Autumn,
for me, is one of my favorite seasons in the year. When I still lived
in southern Idaho, spring and fall were my favorite seasons because
the weather was blissfully cool compared to the scorching summers.
Here on the Oregon coast, we haven't seen the kind of heat I'm used
to seeing in the summer. But the cooler days and seeing the frost on
windshields when I get up in the morning is still as wonderful as it
always has been.
Autumn
also brings harvest time for many plants. We're still getting
peppers, both sweet and hot. Our tomatoes quit producing a while ago.
But we still have artichokes growing, and we're getting more than I
thought we would from a small handful of plants. We got some peas and
green beans from our plants over the last couple months. We even got
a few tiny onions and some nice carrots. The farm my husband and his
partners started is beginning to, pardon the pun, bear fruit for us.
I'm
loving Oregon and the lovely weather here. Autumn is getting under
way and it's reflected in everything around me. I love seeing the
world shift and change as the seasons turn. Each season brings with
it something new. Each season tells a different story. For me, the
stories of spring and autumn are my favorite. Their tales are woven
with sights, scents, and sounds that evoke good memories for me.
What
is your favorite season? What reminds you most of it?
Monday, October 5, 2015
Romance, tragic back stories, and overpowered characters in fantasy and science fiction
So,
over the weekend in one of the groups I'm part of on Facebook someone
posted the blurb they wrote for their fantasy novel. It was an
interesting blurb and made me want to read the book. The very first
comment made on the post irritated me though. The person who
commented said that she found the concept interesting but she
“thought there would be a romantic interest for the MC”. I didn't
follow the thread so I don't know what the end result of that comment
was, but it brought up a point that made me think.
I
write fantasy and sci fi. Yes, I do often put romantic points in my
stories. But there are some that I've written/am planning on writing
that don't have romantic ties. They have deep friendships, but
nothing that lands them in bed with each other or mooncalfing over
each other like lovesick teenagers.
One
of my current projects, my cyberpunk story I've given a temporary
title of Hackers, has three
main characters – two male, one female. Guess what? None of them
end up in a romantic relationship with each other. In fact, none of
them have romantic relationships with anyone. It's not necessary for
the story.
I see this most often when dealing with strong female characters. So many authors think they need some kind of partner - male or female - to make them better. A lot of the time these strong female characters end up blubbering idiots around their significant others and are forced eventually to rely on their romantic partners to save them.
I see this most often when dealing with strong female characters. So many authors think they need some kind of partner - male or female - to make them better. A lot of the time these strong female characters end up blubbering idiots around their significant others and are forced eventually to rely on their romantic partners to save them.
I'm
not saying that there shouldn't be romantic interests in the story.
What I'm saying is if they aren't integral to the story line, leave
them out. Also, take a chance and plot around them to see if they can
be replaced by other relationships. If they can, give that a try. You
might be surprised by how interesting those stories become when
you're not putting
romance in them.
Speaking
of relationships, let's talk for a moment about the family situations
of characters in the fantasy and sci fi genres. Specifically the fact
that many authors seem to think that the best characters come from
backgrounds with some kind of tragedy in them. The death of a parent
(or both parents), abuse at the hands of someone (a family member or
a spouse), being the target of bullies, being loners because they're
too strange to make friends, etc. I see a lot of these things in both
fantasy and sci fi.
I've
read some interesting stories recently where the characters had
perfectly healthy personal lives, albeit with some unusual
circumstances they were dealing with. They had parents they could
talk to, sometimes siblings that were around to provide support, and
in some cases spouses and children who gave a sense of normalcy in
the chaos that was their lives. Sure, these relationships also
offered some good points of tension when a family member or friends
were threatened. But that's part of what made the stories so
interesting. There was a very real sense of urgency in these scenes
because of the kind of decisions that had to be made.
Tragic
pasts can lead to characters making stupid mistakes, trusting the
wrong people, and create more problems for the protagonists as they
go along in the story. Then again, so can having healthy and normal
relationships with family and friends. People don't need bad things
happening to them to make mistakes. I've made plenty in my life
without needing any kind of help.
Now,
don't get me wrong. I write tragic backgrounds too. I think it's
something every fantasy or sci fi author plays with at some point in
their career. I'm looking for ways to get beyond that, to provide
interesting characterization without relying on tragedy. Sometimes it
doesn't work out that way. Sometimes, to explain something that's
integral to the story, you need a little pain in the past (or
present). But it doesn't need to be the only thing you use.
I
think the trend in fantasy and sci fi – which is thankfully fading
– is making characters seem larger than life by making them less
than “human”. And I don't mean the characters that aren't human
beings in this. Even aliens and elves can be made sympathetic by
giving them traits that we can identify with. But I've seen a lot of
books where the poor protagonist is given so much to deal with that
they're overwhelmed. But they're not allowed to be overwhelmed.
They're given outs like special powers that suddenly appear with no
other reason than they're necessary to get out of a situation. Or
some kind of guardian angel (or something of a similar nature)
appears to rescue them because it's hopeless and they're never going
to be able to get out of it on their own. Or...or...or… I could go
on with examples.
What
I look for when I'm choosing a fantasy or sci fi book is real people.
Characters that I can connect to on a personal level. I want to
believe these people are real. I want to care about who they are and
what their lives are like. I want to imagine what their life will be
like when the book/series is over. I've put books down halfway
through because I stopped caring about the protagonists. I've stopped
reading several series because things got too over the top with
special powers and allies popping up where there shouldn't be any
just because the author didn't want to go to the trouble of letting
their protagonists find solutions on their own.
That's
not to say that if a character gets into a situation they can't
handle that there can't be someone to help. But try to keep the
random encounters for that to a minimum. There are probably a
plethora of people around that could prove to be useful. Use them
instead of inserting someone new for every problem.
Tropes
are there because people love them. I get this. But people are
beginning to want to wander away from the usual suspects. If they're
there, they want something fresh and exciting. So readers and writers
need to try expanding their horizons and venturing down a path that's
new to them. And yes, I do include myself in this need to expand
horizons too.
Friday, October 2, 2015
Friday Fiction: Lady Raven
I started this story some time ago based on a dream I had. It's grown since then. It's based in Aleran, though on a different continent than my main story lines.
Ravensha was recognized by Sky-Lord Sharn as his progeny, something which threw the aeries into confusion as it has been centuries since a Sky-Lord acknowledged a female child. A stranger has come into the aeries and spun tales to ensnare the mind of the Sky-Lord. Ravensha has been chosen to fulfill an ancient prophecy. Here she has just discovered her fate.
Ravensha was recognized by Sky-Lord Sharn as his progeny, something which threw the aeries into confusion as it has been centuries since a Sky-Lord acknowledged a female child. A stranger has come into the aeries and spun tales to ensnare the mind of the Sky-Lord. Ravensha has been chosen to fulfill an ancient prophecy. Here she has just discovered her fate.
“Ersa, there is an aerie that has long been abandoned on the far
eastern edge of our territory,” Sharn said, turning to his mate.
“You will have no trouble finding it. It is marked by boundary
stones of red and white. Take Ravensha there and leave her. Choose
from among those women you trust and send them to tend to her. They
are to make certain she has no visitors, that she attends to her
studies, and above all that she does not escape.”
“I don't understand this, Sky-Lord,” Ersa said. “I also don't
like it. We have never trusted any of the humans before this. Why
should we trust the Beast Lords now?”
“Do not question my will if you wish to continue your favored
position, Ersa,” Sharn said.
“I will do as you say, Sky-Lord,” Ersa said. “Though I do not
agree.”
“Agree or not, that is your decision,” Sharn said. “So long as
you obey your orders, I do not care if you agree.” He spread his
wings and left the aerie.
“Mama, the red eyes,” Ravensha said, staring up at her mother.
“What?” Ersa asked sharply.
“The man, the one the Sky-Lord called Maegren,” Ravensha said.
“He had the red eyes like I saw in my dream.”
“You said the red eyes meant trouble for us,” Ersa said. Ravensha
nodded. “Well, there is nothing we can do about it now. Come here,
little one. I'll take you to your new aerie.”
“Yes, mama,” Ravensha said. “Will Usha and Fylan be coming to
see me?”
Ersa picked her up and cast the featherweight spell again. “No. The
Beast Lord says you're to be kept isolated. The Sky-Lord must be
obeyed, no matter how I personally feel on the matter. I'll have
Balna and a few of the others come stay with you.”
Balna was the older female who sometimes took care of Ravensha and
Usha in Ersa's aerie, instead of leaving them in the rookery.
Ravensha knew her well. She had some difficulty flying because she'd
lost an eye fighting with the Lowlanders a few years earlier, but her
mind was as sharp as ever. “Why can't Usha come too? She's not a
male.”
“Usha needs to stay with the other fledglings in the rookery,”
Ersa said. “She must learn how to survive, as you have. I know you
try to protect her, but that will have to stop.” She carried
Ravensha along, catching the wind in only the way a skilled Aeryon
could. “Now be silent. I have to find these markers the Sky-Lord
set up.”
They flew along the face of the Windsheer Cliffs for nearly half an
hour before coming to the white rock the Sky-Lord had spoken of. The
red stone was also visible, and Ersa angled herself towards the ledge
between them. “Here?” Ravensha asked after her mother had landed.
“This will be your aerie now,” Ersa confirmed. She looked around.
“At least he had the sense to furnish it well. You will be very
comfortable here, I think.” She set Ravensha down. “I see he has
included several books and scrolls. I'll instruct Balna to make sure
you can read all of them. It will give you something to do. Perhaps
I'll see if we can teach you to weave or sew or something useful.
You'll have a lot of time on your hands so we'd best find something
to keep you busy.” Ersa ruffled her daughter's hair before diving
off the ledge. Ravensha ran to the edge and watched as her mother
winged away.
Ravensha turned and faced her new home. She explored the side
chambers, finding the privy, the bathing area, and a dark room where
a sleeping pad had been placed. Ravensha came back out into the main
room. She dropped down onto a pile of cushions and wrapped her wings
around her. Tears trickled down her cheeks as she thought of her
brother and sister. This place, this cold and empty place, was not a
safe aerie. It wasn't a place of warmth and comfort, as aeries were
supposed to be. It was a lonely prison, one that deprived Ravensha of
all that she loved. She cried herself into a kind of stupor, and
waited for those who were supposed to attend to her to arrive.
Wednesday, September 30, 2015
Cooking Escapades: Slow cooker meatloaf and chicken soup/stew
So,
this week I'm taking the easy way out and sharing something of my
cooking adventures. I'm learning the joy of using a slow cooker. I've
got two recipes I'm going to share with you. One is a modified
version of a recipe I found on allrecipes.com. (I'll include the link
so you can see the original.) The other one is something I made up
myself based on reading a bunch of recipes. And I do mean a bunch of
recipes. You wouldn't believe the kinds of things you can find when
you're looking for interesting meals to serve a large group of
people. I cook for six people, and the slow cooker makes my life so
much easier.
The
first recipe I'd like to share with you is a slow cooker meatloaf.
Yeah, I know. Meatloaf is traditionally done in the oven, but this
one rocks for being very moist and juicy. The original recipe has six servings. I double it so it fits our needs.
Slow
Cooker Meatloaf
5
eggs
1
½ c milk
1
1/3 c Panko bread crumbs
2
small yellow onions, diced (or one medium)
2
T Italian herb blend
2
tsp salt
1
c chopped fresh mushrooms
2
T garlic powder
3
lbs. Ground beef
Sauce
½
c ketchup
4
T brown sugar
2
tsp ground mustard
1
tsp Worcestershire sauce
Combine
eggs, milk, bread crumbs, onion, salt, herbs, garlic, and mushrooms
in a large bowl. Crumble ground beef over mixture and stir well to
combine. Shape into a round loaf. Place in a slow cooker. (I think ours is either a 6 quart or an 8 quart. Not sure exactly and I haven't really measured it.) Cover and cook on low until a meat thermometer reads 160 F (71 C), 5
to 6 hours.
Whisk
ketchup, brown sugar, mustard, and Worcestershire sauce in a small
bowl. Spoon over meatloaf. Return to slow cooker and cook on low
until heated through, about 15 minutes. Let stand 10 minutes before
cutting.
(I
will admit that I don't actually let it stand 10 minutes before I
cut into it. Usually everyone's too impatient to wait that long.)
My
other recipe that was well received was a chicken soup recipe that I
came up with on the fly based on a chicken soup recipe and a chicken
stew recipe. Neither fit what I was looking for, so I just shoved the
two together and hoped for the best. If you want a stew, all you have
to do with this recipe is dissolve corn starch in cold water and mix
it in near the end to thicken the broth.
Chicken
Soup/Stew
3
lbs boneless, skinless chicken breasts, chopped into 1” pieces
2
small yellow onions, chopped
5
carrots, peeled and thinly sliced
5
medium russet potatoes, chopped (not a dice, but keep the pieces
small for easier cooking)
2
small cans sliced mushrooms, drained
2
10.5 oz cans cream of chicken soup
3-4 c chicken broth (I used Better than Bouillon reduced salt chicken
bouillon to make the broth)
Garlic
powder and ground black pepper to taste
Put
chicken, onions, carrots, potatoes, and mushrooms in the slow cooker.
Mix the cream of chicken soup with the chicken broth. Stir in the
garlic powder and ground black pepper to the taste of your desired
audience. (We like a lot of garlic and pepper, which is why I'm not
giving you a specific amount.) Pour over the soup ingredients. Stir
everything together. Set slow cooker on high for 5-6 hours.
(Again,
this is made to serve the six of us. I'm not sure exactly how many the
official servings is, but it was enough for all six of us to have a
good sized bowl with some leftovers.)
___
I
have other slow cooker recipes I'm experimenting with. Every now and
then I'll post what I'm doing. I think, especially as the weather
gets colder, slow cookers come out more often. I may even try my luck
at doing desserts in the slow cooker. There are plenty of recipes for
that too. I don't know yet what I'll do. But I'm having fun and we'll
see what comes out of it.
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