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Sunday, February 2, 2014
Well, it's been a while
I know, I know.
I keep doing this.
I'll post like crazy for a while and then it falls off and I stop talking to everyone here for days/weeks/months on end. It's not because I don't love all of you. It's because I just don't know what to say. I mean, being an introvert I'm not great at small talk and personally I hate small talk on a blog anyway. If I'm reading a blog I want something interesting, something worth reading. And really, I don't feel like what I have to say is worth reading.
But I'm going to start over again anyway. This blog post was written Saturday night but as you can tell, it's going live Sunday morning. As of this coming week I'm going to be posting more here. At first, it's just going to be 2-3 times a week unless I find something I find that I want to share with you. Then it'll be more often.
One of the things I'm going to start doing in the coming months is sharing some of the shorter bits (as in non-novels...I can't guarantee there won't be some novella length fiction broken up into "chapters") of stories from my fantasy world of Vassa. You may remember me referring to it with Erondhal, Lytharia, Sindla, and a few other things. Yes, you're finally going to get to see a better glimpse of it.
This is coinciding with the writing and editing of the first novel I'm seriously going to try to get published - the ever aggravating Marked. (No seriously, I've tried three times to write a first draft I liked. I think I have one this time, but we'll see.) I plan on starting to query this starting in October, so I'm going to have to do a lot of work between now and then.
I am also looking for beta readers, as always. It's a little over 120k right now. It's length can change varied upon the editing I do next month and what my primary beta reader says. But I want more opinions than just one. So if you're interested, leave me a comment please?
The other thing I'm going to be doing this month, as I work on fixing up those shorts I mentioned, is reading a lot. My goal is a book a day. I'm going to post a bit about each book I read, not every day but a few at a time during my other blog posts. I've already read my first book, though I'm not going to talk too much about it because it was me beta reading for a friend - the lovely Joelle Casteel, who writes erotica/erotic romance with heavy BDSM themes. They are not for the faint of heart. She's going to be working on re-releasing her first book - Out of the Night - soon. Her second book, the one I just finished beta reading, is Gates of the Garden and will be out not too long after.
I've also got a lot of other books on my plate. I've managed to acquire more than 120 e-books from the free list on Amazon and through promotion by other authors (also free e-books from Amazon). Not to mention I was gifted a lovely romance book that I intend on reading as well. I'll be posting short reviews of those and buy links so you can pick them up on your own if you're so inclined.
If there's a topic you're curious about my opinion on, leave me a comment. I'll be glad to answer that too. Just give me some time to get back into the swing of things and we'll see what happens. Thanks to my faithful readers who have stuck with me, and welcome to new readers brought here by Facebook and Twitter. Enjoy what you see and don't forget to grab some cookies and milk on your way through the door. *grin*
Friday, October 25, 2013
Lordac's pet
Lordac returns once again. It's been a full hundred cycles since he came to the island, and things aren't going quite as he'd expected. But his new home is giving him some added power, which comes in very handy.
Lordac frowned. “There
has been no movement from the mountains?” he asked.
“None, Your
Majesty,” the human groveling at his feet said. “No one has seen a dragon in
nearly a hundred cycles. People grow bold even though the stories of the
dragons are still told.”
“A hundred cycles
is nothing to the dragons,” Lordac said. “It is a mere blink of the eye.”
“I don’t like
this,” Sianni said. “Why aren’t the dragons doing anything? Shouldn’t they be
trying to eradicate the children of the Guardians, like they used to do when
they attacked the city?”
“Yes they should,
if they hold true to their old pattern,” Lordac said. “I don’t like this either.
They’re probably up to something.” He sighed. “Keep the spies moving in the
north. I want to know as soon as even a scale is seen.”
“Yes, Your
Majesty,” the man said. He bowed his way out of the throne room.
“What are we going
to do now, Lordac?” Sianni asked. “Mother wants information on what the dragons
are doing.”
“What do we tell
her, that the dragons have receded into their mountains? We don’t know what
they’re doing. They could be gathering their strength to attack. They could be
in a torpor. They could have fled the continent altogether. Do you want to run
the risk of dragon fire to check that out?” Lordac asked.
“Not again,”
Sianni said. “I don’t want to face that again. That hurt.”
“Then we have to
be patient and see what my agents turn up,” Lordac said.
“I wonder what the
mortals are doing on the mainland?” Sianni asked. “Maybe we should go see how
they’re faring, get a better idea for how things are going. Have they moved up
to the northern half of Vassa yet? Or are they still clinging to the shreds of
their lives in the south?”
“Why don’t you go
find out?” Lordac said. “It would do you good to get out and see the world.”
“I’m not going
anywhere,” Sianni said. “I told you before I don’t trust what you’re doing
here. Why are you allowing other people to settle on this island? Aren’t the
people born here enough for you?”
“Sianni, do you
have any idea about the concept of inbreeding?” Lordac asked. “I recall a
rather messy result when some of Hlad’s children decided to only breed with
each other. Within a few generations they became lackwits and imbeciles, with
no more intelligence than that of a loper. Hlad had to destroy all of them and
start over. I don’t have any intention of seeing that happen with the people of
this island. I need their intellect intact.”
“I wonder how the
mortals are getting over here. The desert is fairly large and stands between
you and the rest of Vassa,” Sianni said.
“There are ways of
getting around it, if you go far enough east and even possibly west,” Lordac
said. “Though I will admit I didn’t travel too far to the west when I first
started exploring Vassa.”
“I ran into a lot
of Rauha’s children in the forest there,” Sianni said. “They were less than
pleased to see me.”
“You’re the
daughter of one of the Guardians of Darkness,” Lordac said. “We fought against
the children of the Guardians of Light just as much as we did the dragons. Why
would they be pleased to see you?”
“Well, I’m proof
that mother at least has not forgotten this world,” Sianni said. “You think
they’d be grateful for that information.”
“Rauha is probably
still in contact with the bulk of her children. They don’t need you as proof,”
Lordac said, thinking for the first time in a while of the small band of elves
he’d helped before.
“Your Majesty, pardon
the intrusion.” A young woman looked distinctly frightened as she curtsied to
him. “Gereon has returned. He brings new blood with him.”
“Why so
frightened?” Lordac asked. “Did he bring back something so terrifying?”
“There is a female
he brought back,” the woman said. She held up her arm and Lordac could have
sworn he saw bite marks. “She is violent and has injured several people.”
“Have him bring
her to me,” Lordac said. “I would see this wild woman. Perhaps I can tame her.”
“Yes Your Majesty,”
the woman said. She hurried out of the throne room.
A short while
later, a writhing, shrieking thing was dragged into the room. It took three men
and a number of ropes to get her anywhere. “This is the wild woman, Your
Majesty,” Gereon said. “I found her on the edge of a forest near the eastern
border of the desert.”
The woman looked
up with a snarl. Her expression changed when she caught sight of Lordac. “You,”
she said, tossing her hair out of her face. “You are the kind one. You made us
a new home and taught us how to bend the forest again.”
Lordac stared down
at the one eyed female. “Ah yes, I remember you,” he said. “How do your people
fare?”
“We are not
numerous, though our numbers are growing,” the woman said. “Our children now
have a better chance to survive their birthing and live to become adults. A
full generation have passed into adulthood and another has been born. The
forest bends to our will now and we have built ourselves better homes. We do
not visit the forest floor often because it is too wild. I was only down there
because I was searching for a lost child.”
“Your Majesty, we
should kill her,” Gereon said. “She’ll be of no use as breeding stock here on
the island. And none of us speak her vile language as you do.”
“Isn’t that one of
Rauha’s children?” Sianni asked. “She looks a bit like them.”
“Not anymore,”
Lordac said. “Rauha abandoned them in a forest cursed by a Chaos tree. I helped
them find a new way to live.”
“Did you encourage
them to worship mother?” Sianni asked.
“They have the
right to choose who and what they wish to worship,” Lordac said. He sighed. “I’ll
not kill her, Gereon. You’re right that she won’t be good for breeding stock,
but I’m not my mother that would destroy things because they have no obvious
use.”
“I will kill any
who tries to touch me,” the one eyed woman said.
“I believe you
would,” Lordac said. “However, I do not intend to watch any of my people die.
You will stay at my side for now, a wild little thing to entertain me.”
“If that is what
you wish, then I will do as you say,” the woman said. “Remove my bonds.”
“Remove the ropes,
Gereon,” Lordac said.
“Your Majesty, she’ll
attack,” Gereon said.
“She will do no
such thing,” Lordac said. “Release her.”
“Yes, Your
Majesty,” Gereon said. The man cut the ropes binding the woman.
Without warning,
the woman leapt forward. She slammed into Gereon, driving him to the ground.
She seized hold of his head and gave it a savage twist. The sound of the bones
in his neck snapping echoed in the suddenly silent room.
One of the men
drew a short blade and raised it above his head. Lordac held out his hand. The
man froze. “Leave her,” Lordac said. “She only did what was expected. I suppose
I’ll have to find a new man to search Vassa for likely breeding stock though.”
“You would let
this murderer live?” one of the men asked.
“Yes,” Lordac
said. “Though I’ll not let her roam free.” He released his hold on the sword
wielder. A black iron collar appeared around the one eyed woman’s neck. A long
iron chain extended from it to the floor next to Lordac’s throne. Lordac jerked
on the chain and the woman was dragged forward until she fell on her knees in
front of Lordac. The chain shortened until only a few feet remained. “I think I’ll
keep her as a pet for now.”
“Yes Your Majesty.”
The men bowed and left the throne room.
“What is your
name?” Lordac asked.
“Eser.” The woman
pulled at the collar on her neck. “Why must you do this?”
“Because I can’t
have you killing everyone who offends you,” Lordac said. “This will ensure you
are left unmolested by my people.”
“But I am not
free,” Eser said.
“No you’re not,”
Lordac said. “But things will be better this way.” He stood. “I’d better go
inspect the rest of what Gereon brought back with him. At least the ship
builders are listening to me now. The boats they’re making are far superior to
anything on the mainland.” He strode out of the throne room.
He inspected the
group and decided to turn them loose in the general population. There was a
good mix of men and women. He was pleased to see that there were no children in
this batch. Children were always difficult to deal with when they’d been taken
from their parents.
Lordac decided to
take a walk around his kingdom. He started with the shipyards. A half dozen
ships were being built. It was hard because wood was so scarce on his island.
He’d cultivated a small forest for the past hundred cycles and still there
weren’t enough trees to do everything he wanted to do.
He visited homes
and businesses, speaking to his people. They were all a generally happy group,
content to live and serve under his rule. Their grandparents had told them the
tales of how things had been before he came, and they had no desire to return
to that life.
As Lordac returned
to the tower, he frowned. He could feel the energy of a fresh death. It had
taken him a few candlemarks to tour his kingdom. Gereon’s death energy would
have faded out by that point. He entered his throne room.
Sianni was sitting
next to the throne as she always did. Lying on the ground in front of her was
Eser. The elven woman was dead, her face twisted in a mask of agony. “What did
you do?” Lordac demanded.
“I told her she
had to worship mother and she refused,” Sianni said. “I punished her for her
defiance. I think I broke her though. I’m not very good with mortals. They’re
so fragile.”
Lordac removed the
collar from Eser’s neck. He closed her eye and smoothed out her limbs. He stood
and faced his sister. “I think it’s time for you to take her place, little
sister. Yes, you chained at my feet will be a grand thing,” Lordac said.
Sianni laughed. “You
can’t do anything to me,” she said. “You tried, remember?”
“True, but I didn’t
try that hard,” Lordac said. He brought his hands up. An iron collar fastened
around Sianni’s neck. A great black chain wound down and around until it met
the floor. Energy crackled along the chain as he twisted the links.
Sianni brought her
hands up and pulled on the collar. It didn’t budge. Her look of scorn turned to
one of confusion. She pulled on the collar again but it didn’t move. She tugged
on the chain. She shrieked and pulled back hands burned by the magic coursing
through the metal. “What did you do?” she asked.
“Exactly what I
said I’d do,” Lordac said.
“But how is this
possible?” Sianni asked.
“Sianni, you haven’t
been paying attention have you?” Lordac asked. “What am I to these people? What
am I to Eser’s people? I am their patron, their king, their god. I can draw
power from them as mother draws power from those who worship her.”
“You are trying to
take mother’s place,” Sianni said. She tried to pull away but the collar held
her. “I’ll tell mother. She’ll obliterate you.”
“How are you going
to tell mother when you can’t leave my throne room?” Lordac asked with a
vicious smile. “You’re trapped here until I decide to release you, and do you
really think I’ll be doing that any time soon?”
“I’ll kill you
myself,” Sianni said. She lunged forward. The chain shortened. She choked and
fell back onto her knees.
“Now, now, little
sister,” Lordac said. “You shouldn’t be so hasty. You’ll only end up hurting
yourself.” He called for one of his servants. “See that this body is dealt with
in the usual fashion.”
“Yes Your Majesty,”
the man said. He collected Eser’s body and hurried out of the throne room.
Lordac seated himself back in his throne. He smiled as Sianni shrieked and
tried to attack him again. The chain held her back and she collapsed. She
stared up at him with hate filled eyes. Lordac smiled and leaned back.
“Now, let’s see,”
Lordac said. “Where shall we go from here?”
Friday, October 18, 2013
Lordac and Sianni
Last week I introduced you to Lordac. Well here he is again. This time his sister has come to call. She's not a welcome guest.
Lordac settled back in his throne,
a smile playing at the corners of his lips. Of course, it wasn’t much of a
throne. Then again, his new home wasn’t much of a castle. More a squat tower
slowly limping its way skyward.
“Your Majesty, there is a woman
here who insists on seeing you,” one of his human servants said, bowing low.
“Who is she?” Lordac asked.
“We don’t know,” the servant said. “She
didn’t come on one of the boats. She just appeared on the beach.”
Lordac sighed. “There is only one
creature that would be so unbearably rude as to come where she’s not invited,”
he said. “Let her in. She’ll just force her way through anyway.” The servant
bowed again and scurried out of the room.
A few moments later, a very
familiar figure stalked into the throne room. She looked a little worse for
wear, her clothing scorched and her once long flowing locks ruthlessly sheared
off at her jaw. “Lordac, what are you doing?” she demanded.
“Sianni, you look like you’ve been
having quite the adventure,” Lordac said.
“Mother sent us to keep track of
the dragons,” Sianni said. “What are you doing on this island?”
“Cultivating spies,” Lordac said
with a smile. “You know as well as I do that you and I can’t approach the
dragons directly. Though it certainly looks like you’ve been giving that a try.
The humans on the mainland are all so superstitious it’s hard to get any of
them to talk to me let alone agree to watch the dragons. So I came here.”
“How is this cultivating spies?”
Sianni demanded. “These people are so backwards they’re still living in grass
huts. How in the names of the Guardians did you even get them to build you this
tower?”
“It’s amazing what a little
kindness can do for you,” Lordac said. “I am aware that these people are
simple, Sianni. That’s what will make them the perfect spies. I have to build
up a decent civilization here, work on finding something to trade with the
mainland so my people have a legitimate reason for being there. Then and only
then will I be able to achieve the goal that mother sent us here for.”
“Your people?” Sianni asked. “These people should belong to mother,
not you.”
Lordac sighed. “Sianni, mother is a
distant dream to the mortals of this island,” he said. “As are the rest of the
Guardians. They abandoned these people when the God of Time shattered the
continent. They have no one to watch over them. I simply filled the void.”
“You’re setting yourself up as
their god?” Sianni asked.
“As their king,” Lordac said. “I
certainly wouldn’t claim something so pretentious as the title of a god. I’m
not that suicidal, Sianni. If mother found out she’d erase me from existence.
Please recall what happened to the others when they tried that very thing.”
“I think I ought to tell mother
what you’re doing,” Sianni said. “She won’t be pleased.”
Lordac laughed. “Do you really
think I’d let you leave here?” He gestured with one hand. Heavy black chains
wrapped around Sianni. “You’re not going anywhere, dear sister. Perhaps by keeping
you here I can also protect you from your own stupidity. At least now the
dragons won’t be able to attack you.”
Sianni brought her arms up and
twisted her wrists. The chains fell away. “I’m not powerless, Lordac,” Sianni
said.
Lordac stood. “Neither am I, sister
dear,” he said, gesturing again. A ball of light appeared in front of him. He
sent it at Sianni.
She dodged it with ease. “Too slow,
Lordac,” she said.
“Not at all,” Lordac said. He
pulled the threads of magic and the ball rebounded. It struck Sianni in the
back.
Sianni staggered forward but kept
her feet. “Not good enough,” she said. She gestured and a ball of light similar
to his appeared in front of her. Hers shot off at great speed and Lordac barely
managed to escape its blast. His throne wasn’t so lucky. It shattered, sending
fragments of wood and shreds of fabric through the room.
“That was rude,” Lordac said. “What
did my throne ever do to you?” He pulled the threads again and wrapped them
around Sianni’s wrists.
Sianni snapped the threads. “You’re
using weak magic, Lordac. That will never hold me,” she said. Another ball
appeared in front of her. It flew towards Lordac. Lordac dodged and the ball
opened a hole in the wall behind him.
“Stone is a very precious commodity
on this island,” Lordac said. He pulled the threads tightly around Sianni,
augmenting their strength with his own. “I rather dislike wanton destruction,
especially of someone else’s property.”
Sianni shrieked and struggled to
break free of the threads. “I won’t let you defy mother,” she said. Energy
surged around her and the threads broke again. Lordac took a step back. “You
won’t live to regret this, Lordac.” Sianni vanished.
Lordac called for one of his human
servants. “See to it that the wall is repaired as soon as possible. I’ll be
back shortly,” he said. With that, he stepped out of the mortal realm and into
his mother’s.
Lordac had no trouble finding his
mother. He could hear Sianni’s strident tones from halfway across the garden.
He followed the sound. Sianni had thrown herself on the ground in front of
Morana, leaning her head into her mother’s lap. Morana smoothed Sianni’s shorn
hair as she told her mother of Lordac’s transgression.
“You had better have a very good
reason for what you’re doing, Lordac,” Morana said, looking up as he reached
them.
“I’m cultivating spies, mother,”
Lordac said. “The dragons are too powerful to approach directly. The people of
Vassa are not simple sheep anymore. They do not trust anything that even
remotely reminds them of the Guardians. I could get no further with them than I
could with the dragons, though at least the mortals were less damaging when
they drove me off.”
“So why are you able to approach
the people of this island you seem to have made yourself king of?” Morana
asked.
“It’s simple, really,” Lordac said.
“These are the mortals that were forgotten by the Guardians. They wandered off
from the city and started their own community. They were quite well developed
for a primitive society when the continent shattered and took with it their
stability. They’ve been floundering ever since.”
“So what makes you think they need
you and not me?” Morana asked.
“I never said they didn’t need you,
mother,” Lordac said. “I never even implied it. I’m simply helping them rebuild
their society. When I’m done, I’ll have reintroduced the concept of a deity to
them and they will fall on their knees in humble worship of you.”
“I don’t see anything wrong with
that,” Morana said. “Sianni dear, I think you overreacted to your brother’s
actions. However, I don’t like the fact that you two attacked each other. No more
fighting. I sent you to do a job. I expect it to be done, and I expect you to
use whatever means are necessary to do it.”
“Of course, mother,” Lordac said. “I
am, as I have ever been, your most faithful son.”
“We’ll see,” Morana said. “Sianni,
you could learn something of subtlety from your brother. You need to stop
approaching the dragons directly, work through another agent. I expect results,
children. And I expect them relatively soon.”
“Yes mother,” Lordac said, bowing
deeply.
“Yes mother,” Sianni said as she
pouted.
“I’m glad you understand,” Morana
said. “Now get back to Vassa and get me that information.” Lordac smiled at his
sister and stepped back to the southern island.
“Your Majesty, the repairs are not
yet finished,” one of his servants said as Lordac reappeared.
“I didn’t expect they would be,”
Lordac said. “I am not angry.”
“Don’t think this is the end of
this, Lordac,” Sianni said as she appeared in front of him. “Mother may believe
you but I don’t.”
“Mother doesn’t believe me either,”
Lordac said. “But she knows that the best way to get information is to work
through the other races, and these humans will be my agents in finding out what
the dragons are up to. Perhaps if you focused less on your desires and more on
mother’s wishes you’d find a way to use the mortal races to help you too.”
“I’m staying here,” Sianni said. “I’m
going to watch you. When you bring these people to mother, then I’ll leave. But
if you don’t, I’ll go back to tell her.”
“Sianni, you are by far the most
childish woman I have ever met,” Lordac said. “However, if you feel you must
remain here so be it. Just don’t get in my way and don’t interfere. Or I will
seal you up and lock you away.”
“You can’t,” Sianni said. “I’m too
powerful.”
“Care to make a wager on that?”
Lordac asked. Sianni glared at him and stalked off. Lordac laughed, and
followed her out of the tower.
Friday, October 11, 2013
Lordac gets his first race
I introduced you to the Gray King a couple weeks ago, in a little snippet from the short story I was working on. Here is the larger piece, though it's very rough and I'm not sure where it's going from here.
Lordac
sat back in his throne, his eyes half closed. All around him the
moans of the damned echoed through the vaulted chamber. He sighed and
shifted in his seat. A few of the liches pontificating before him
paused but when he showed no other sign of moving, they resumed.
“My
lord, forgive the intrusion.” The squat, toad-like creations his
mother used for messengers were among the only living things in this
realm and Lordac welcomed their appearance, even if it usually meant
trouble for him. “Your mother is looking for you.”
“She
knows where to find me. She's the one who put me here in the first
place,” Lordac said. He sighed and straightened the iron crown on
his brow. “All right, where is she?”
“In
her garden,” the creature said.
“Where
in her garden?” Lordac asked.
“By
the roses,” the creature said.
“Which
ones?” Lordac hated playing these games.
“The
black ones,” the creature said.
“Well
that narrows it down to only a quarter of the garden,” Lordac
muttered. He stood up and stretched. “I'll be back as soon as my
mother is finished with me this time.”
“If
she lets you come back,” one of the liches muttered.
Lordac
made note of which one had spoken. When he returned, he'd have to
think of a suitable punishment for it. There was, after all, very
little to amuse him in this sterile, dead world.
Lordac's
cloak swirled behind him as he headed out of the tower that his
mother had named him lord over. The undead scuttled out of his way as
he strode down the black stone floor.
He
made his way to his mother's garden, a mocking echo of the glory it
had once held in the mortal world. For once, his mother was
relatively easy to find. She was seated with Sianni and a few of his
other siblings nearest to the thicket of rose bushes that she favored
when punishing wayward mortal souls.
“Lordac,
I was beginning to wonder if my summons was going to go unanswered
again,” Morana, Guardian of Death, said as he came up. “I see you
are as formal as ever.”
“Your
messengers are dreadfully slow, mother,” Lordac said. He smiled and
bowed to her. “I am, as I have always been, your most faithful
son.”
“Well
you're the only one who hasn't tried to rise up against me, that's
for certain,” Morana said. “Which is why you and Sianni are going
to do something for me.”
“What
is that, mother?” Lordac asked.
“The
dragons are up to something,” Morana said. “The others are in
agreement with me. We don't know what, but ever since the end of the
war they've been brooding in those mountains of theirs. I want you
and Sianni to go to Vassa and see if you can find out what's going
on. Make yourself useful and find something to amuse yourselves while
you are there, but keep an eye on the dragons.”
“I
have no problem with going to Vassa, but how are we to keep an eye on
the dragons? If we get anywhere near their homes the dragons are
going to notice,” Lordac said. “And Sianni? Really, mother? You
don't have enough problems with this new world without sending her
with me?”
“Your
sister is perfectly capable of handling this small task,” Morana
said. “I could always send one of the others with her instead if
you don't want to do it.”
“I'll
do it,” Lordac said. “But you still haven't answered my first
question.”
“That's
up to you to figure out,” Morana said. “The others are sending
their children to do the same thing.”
“I
doubt that,” Lordac muttered under his breath. He checked to see if
his mother had heard him, but she seemed cheerfully ignorant of his
comment. “When did you want us to go?”
“As
soon as you can possibly leave,” Morana said. “You are my
children, so that gives you some power of your own. If you need me
for anything, call for me and I'll help you where I can. The Elder
Gods are being rather finicky about what we can do so I may not be
able to do much.”
“The
Elder Gods have been in a snit since you and the others declared war
on the dragons,” Lordac said.
“The
dragons declared war on us, we did not declare war on them. We simply
retaliated when they attacked,” Morana said.
“Of
course, mother,” Lordac said. “I was only a child at the time so
my memory of the events are of course faulty.”
Morana
turned her attention to one of her daughters. One pale hand stroked
Sianni's dark curls. “You won't disappoint me, will you, Sianni?”
“No
mother,” Sianni said breathlessly. She smiled adoringly up at the
goddess who'd created her.
“Excellent,”
Morana said. “Now go, both of you.”
Lordac
bowed to his mother and turned away. “Lordac, wait for me,”
Sianni called.
“Why?”
Lordac asked, glancing over his shoulder. “You can take yourself to
Vassa. You don't need me to help you.”
“Mother
wants us to work together,” Sianni said.
“Mother
wants us both to go to Vassa,” Lordac said. “There was nothing in
what she said to make me think she expected us to stay together.”
“What
am I supposed to do if you're not with me?” Sianni asked.
“You'll
find something to amuse yourself,” Lordac said. He continued
walking, ignoring his sister's pleas.
He
returned to his tower long enough to exchange his fine clothes for
something more appropriate to the mortal world. It wasn't as if his
strange pallor, his black eyes, and his height wouldn't alert only
the moderately observant individual that he wasn't a mortal. He
sighed and returned to his throne room.
“Are
you leaving us, my lord?” one of the liches asked.
“For
a time, yes,” Lordac said. “Do try to keep the old place from
falling apart any more than it already is while I'm gone.”
Everything around him blurred and the sudden shift of the smells told
him that though he was surrounded by darkness he was no longer in his
mother's realm.
He
glanced up and saw tiny pin pricks of light. Stars,
he thought. I haven't seen stars in a while.
He heard a strange sound to his right. He turned his head. Something
with glowing eyes was growling at him. He frowned. A large canine
snarled and leapt at him. Lordac moved out of the beast's way and
started to walk away. The animal lunged at him again. With a quick
blow, Lordac snapped the thing's neck. He dumped the body and
continued on his way.
Something didn't feel right. He stopped walking. He sniffed the air.
There were a whole myriad of scents he didn't recognize. It had been
some time since he was in the mortal world but he couldn't remember
smelling anything like this. He knelt down and touched the earth
beneath his feet. It was dry and granulated.
“What is this?” he asked, standing up and looking around. Though
it was dark his eyes picked out shapes easily. Or they would have, if
there had been shapes to see. The land around him was flat and
unchanging. He turned slowly, taking in everything around him. There,
in the distance, was a smudge of something. He turned and headed in
that direction.
The sun rose and Lordac was able to get a better look at the
wilderness he now trekked through. Sand as far as the eye could see,
with no sign of anything to break it up. The smudge he'd seen in the
distance looked to be part of the massive forest that had dominated
the continent when he last walked the mortal world. The race that
Rauha, Guardian of Peace, had created lived within the forest.
Perhaps they would be useful in keeping tabs on the dragons.
As the sun climbed higher in the sky, the heat increased until Lordac
began to cast around for someplace to rest. There was no place in
sight other than the forest on the horizon. He stopped and regarded
it with a disgruntled expression. It wasn't that far away, but it
might as well have been on the other side of the continent with how
hot the day had grown.
Lordac decided to risk detection. He focused on the forest and pulled
on the threads of magic. The world around him blurred. A discordant
sound emerged from the threads. He staggered as he came to a stop.
He was closer to the forest but not as close as he'd intended. He
frowned. That was odd. Something in the forest was acting against
him. He increased his pace and covered the distance within just a few
candlemarks.
The forest was nothing like the primeval woods they'd left behind. He
watched as vines writhed through the trees like slow, barbed
serpents. Twisted beasts prowled in the shadows. From deep within the
forest he sensed something that was completely out of place in this
world. Curious, Lordac plunged himself into the forest.
Here, the beasts pulled back from him. Nothing molested him as he
made his way to the center of the mass of trees. A white tree
shimmered in a shaft of sunlight. Its branches were laden with
iridescent fruit. Beneath its branches, a handful of elves white of
skin and hair wandered aimlessly. They whimpered, pressed themselves
up against the tree, clawed at the fruit, before returning to their
wandering.
“A Chaos tree,” Lordac whispered. “No wonder the forest is so
twisted.” He backed carefully away from the tree, trying not to
draw the attention of the cursed elves beneath lurking in its shadow.
As he drew back, he heard muffled weeping coming from the trees
behind him. He followed the sound until he found a group of elves
huddled at the center of a grove. All of them bore marks of having
been mauled by the things that now prowled the trees.
A few of them saw him and drew back in horror. “You are one of the
cursed ones,” a young female with only one eye said. “Stay back.
We'll not let you take more of our children.”
“I am not one of the cursed ones,” Lordac said. “I would know
what has happened here.”
“The white tree came and the forest changed,” the woman said.
Several of the others were clinging to crude weapons and watching him
warily as she spoke. “Nothing here answers to us anymore. We are
hunted yet we cannot hunt because nothing that prowls here is safe to
eat. We call and we call but there are none left to answer our
prayers.”
“I will answer your prayers,” Lordac said. He looked up. “I
will climb to the higher branches to see what I may.” He seized one
of the lower branches and pulled himself up into a tree.
He climbed as high as he dared. He surveyed the upper branches. There
was fruit up here. He reached out and seized one. He took a bite. It
was untainted. Small animals scampered among the tops of the trees,
and birds nested without fear.
He climbed back down. “How can you answer our prayers?” the one
eyed woman asked. “You are no god.”
“I am your god,” Lordac said. “You are small and light. You can
climb higher than I did. But there is good fruit and animals that are
not tainted in the tops of the trees. Build your homes there. Your
hunts will bring you better food.”
“But how are we to shape the forest? We cannot bond to it as we
once did,” the one eyed female said.
“Blood,” Lordac said. “The cursed ones, as you call them, have
been corrupted by a great power. Only life's power will permit you
some control over the forest again. To do that you must shed some of
your blood and bond yourselves to the forest. It will not give you
complete control, and you will still need to take to the high
branches, but you should be able to bend the trees to your will.”
“How do we do this?” the one eyed woman asked.
Lordac began pulling on the threads. “Take your knives. Each one of
you, the children included, must open a small cut on your hands. Your
blood must touch the forest floor.” The group eyed him suspiciously
but they did as he told them. Everyone, down to the infants at their
mother's breasts, were cut and their blood mingled with the earth.
Lordac yanked on the threads, tying them to the blood they'd shed.
Shrieks of pain echoed as the strands burrowed into their flesh. A
few moments later, they all stood there gasping. Infants and children
whimpered. “What did you do?” the one eyed woman asked.
“You are now bound to the forest. Though it will be slow to do so
at first, it will answer you to some degree,” Lordac said. “Now,
take your children and climb. Climb as high as you can. Build your
homes at the tops of the trees. Your lives will now be tied to the
upper levels of the forest.”
“How are we to build?” the one eyed woman asked.
“Surely you remember how to shape the trees,” Lordac said. “I
know you used to be able to do that. Command the branches to weave
themselves into homes for you. Scavenge wood from the forest floor,
though I would be careful in that as you will not be able to control
the beasts.”
“We have no tools,” the one eyed woman said. “We have lost
everything.”
Lordac sighed. This was going to take a little more power than he was
wanting to use. The last thing he wanted to do was attract his
mother's attention. “I will help you this once. Then you will have
to help yourselves.”
Lordac climbed back up the tree. He began by twisting threads and
binding branches to each other. He grabbed smaller tree limbs and
wove them together. Several candlemarks later he climbed back down.
“What did you do? We heard the trees call out,” the one eyed
woman said.
“Climb and find new homes. They will do until you can build
something better for yourselves,” Lordac said.
Children were slung on backs and infants cradled against chests. The
elves clambered up the trees, twisting and turning with the branches
as they climbed higher. He could hear their cries as they reached the
crude shelters he'd created for them. As he turned to leave, the one
eyed woman dropped down onto one of the lower branches.
“Who are you, that we may direct our prayers to you,” she said.
Lordac looked at her thoughtfully for a moment. “I am Lordac, the
Gray King. I will hear your prayers and if it pleases me, I will
answer them. I will not coddle you as Rauha did. You must learn to
survive on your own. But I will help when I feel it is necessary.”
“We will build shrines to you and our children will worship your
name,” the one eyed woman said. She climbed back up the tree.
Lordac carefully wove a net over the community so he would know if
they called out to him. He smiled. These would only be the first. He
turned and walked out of the forest. It wouldn't do to disobey his
mother. For now.
Friday, September 27, 2013
Fiction Friday - Meet Lordac
Since the vlog isn't going well, I thought I'd share a bit of the fiction I'm writing right now. Lordac is the Gray King in Vassa, a demi-god who wants to break free of his mother, the Goddess of Death.
Lordac sat back in his throne,
his eyes half closed. All around him the moans of the damned echoed
through the vaulted chamber. He sighed and shifted in his seat. A few
of the liches pontificating before him paused but when he showed no
other sign of moving, they resumed.
“My lord, forgive the
intrusion.” The squat, toad-like creations his mother used for
messengers were among the only living things in this realm and Lordac
welcomed their appearance, even if it usually meant trouble for him.
“Your mother is looking for you.”
“She knows where to find me.
She's the one who put me here in the first place,” Lordac said. He
sighed and straightened the iron crown on his brow. “All right,
where is she?”
“In her garden,” the creature
said.
“Where in her garden?” Lordac
asked.
“By the roses,” the creature
said.
“Which ones?” Lordac hated
playing these games.
“The black ones,” the
creature said.
“Well that narrows it down to
only a quarter of the garden,” Lordac muttered. He stood up and
stretched. “I'll be back as soon as my mother is finished with me
this time.”
“If she lets you come back,”
one of the liches muttered.
Lordac made note of which one had
spoken. When he returned, he'd have to think of a suitable punishment
for it. There was, after all, very little to amuse him in this
sterile, dead world.
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